English Language
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After you finished your draft, you move on to correcting your mistakes. Editing and revising your essay helps to make it flow better. But dont forget, editing and revising are not the same, they are similar.
Edit/Revise
Difference between editing and revising
Edit
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Fixing grammar problems, punctuation, or word choice
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Edit yourself
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focuses on the paper as a product
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Makes your essay more easy to undestand
Revise
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Deals with the main idea
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the purpose of revision is to ask questions, expand ideas, etc
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Make ideas more clear rather than correting them
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Increase understanding of the paper
Example
Pollution which is one of the biggest problems facing the world today has many effects on human life. First of all, pollution is bad for people's health. For example, smog, caused by car's exhaust fumes and factory emissions, can lead to lung diseases in humans. Also, food and water can be polluted by poisonous chemicals, and this can cause cancer in the people who consume them. Another effect of pollution is the destruction of human habitat.
Legend:
Underline: Revise
Red: Edit